Moriah Leila

Very good, yet again you have written a story that draws the reader in almost instantly. I have very few suggestions, just a couple nitpicks. Then that would put a ...

Thank you to all of you who have the patience to read my work and I appreciate your critiques! The fragrant scent of orchids and saltwater wafted through Josette’s open ...

Thanks for everyone for reviews! After a substantial meal and two rounds of drinks, Jo retired to her room, but not before ordering a bath be sent up. Jo had ...

I could use some help developing the setting of this scene, so if you have any suggestions, I'd love to hear them. Also I tried to make my protagonist not ...

Reviews of my newly edited pieces would be greatly appreciated. As predicted, vendors had already lined up to see what they had gleaned from the cargo ship. Jo was eager ...

Thank you to all that review! I appreciate your feedback. "Land ho!" A baritone voice called from the crow's nest. Jo rushed to the starboard side, relieved to see the ...

I really enjoyed this piece. meg's despair is so real and I absolutely love your descriptions of her paint/artwok/settings etc. It was a very vivid story which i really enjoyed. ...

Yeah!! A new chapter and I am the first to review!! Gripping the handle, I pulled it open and put one foot inside the crude bathroom the men [s]built[/s] had ...

towards the one thing I was drawn to with every fiber of my being. Why is she drawn to the humans so much? It was as if I had stepped ...

I’d never realized the range was this close to our large village-like place. I don't like the wording of village-like place. Maybe, our large wolf village? It was as if ...

Very quickly: You said that Chapter two and three were glimpses into the past that would explain why Genna was being sentenced to death. But you really just gave us ...

oh yeah more to read!! I love it!! Quick suggestions (Yeah I have some!!): Jeff glanced at me, and Alyssa looked where I was curiously. Wording is weird. Perhaps, Jeff ...

Again I am too late, but I just had to give you my praise. We now understand why Genna pitys Jeff for having to stand guard..Bravo on that. Oohh and ...

GAH I was so excited because 1. I love this story 2. I had found something to critique of your work But alas The Fates are not fair. Everyone covered ...

I am just so impressed by your story. But it makes me sad to not have anything to critique, I feel like I should give you some sort of feedback. ...